Success Criteria: Give 2 examples of personification from Fog or Two Sunflowers Move in a Yellow Room.
Personification: Giving human traits to non-human or abstract things, or making a non-human thing do things that only a human can do.
In your literacy books brainstorm a list of weather types or effects e.g snow, frost, rainbow, hail sunshine.
Then write short sentences which personify those weather effects.
Choose your favorite 2 to post as a comment on this blog.
Finally in your literacy books comment on whether you have achieved todays WALT -
The thunder grumbled like an old man.
ReplyDeleteThe blizzard swallowed the town.
Well done Kristin - two wonderful examples. SCA.
DeleteThe rain swam over us.
ReplyDeleteThe thunder grumbled like my stomach.
SCA - It's making me hungry.
DeleteThe snow tip-toed onto the car.
ReplyDeleteThe wind screamed through the trees.
Lovely examples - SCA
DeleteThe snow slept soundly on the fields
ReplyDeleteThe rain jogged down the gentle river.
Wow! Wonderful use of language - SCA
DeleteWhile the sun looks down the rain crashes onto earths floor.
ReplyDeleteThe tornado cleans up the city's while passing by.
SCA
DeleteThe sunshine swam into the mourning meadow.
ReplyDeleteThe sliviery snow whispered sweet nothings in my ear.
By Kate & Sophie :D
SCA - Well done
DeleteThe rainbow cartwheeled across the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe wind whistled through the trees.
Cartwheeled is a lovely to describe the rainbow. SCA
DeleteThe hail stormed over the city.
ReplyDeleteThe sun shined on me like a .light
Good try
Delete<3. 1. The cloud was stalking his friend.
ReplyDelete2. The hail was laughing at elephant.
Well done - SCA
DeleteThe snow dances through the misty night.
ReplyDeleteThe sun saunted past me.
I love sauntered - wonderful vocab. SCA
DeleteThe sun rose from it's sleep.
ReplyDeleteThe sun sets down to head to sleep.
SCA
DeleteThe snow grasped us in it's cold, white hand.
ReplyDeleteThe hail jumped around in the grass.
Wonderful - SCA
Delete1. The rainbow runs away.
ReplyDelete2. The wind whistles through the air.
SCA
DeleteThe Sun shone like a bright light in the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe hail looked like millions of marbles falling from the sky.
Good try. See me for some more help.
Deletethe hail cried with despare
ReplyDeleteCapital letters, full stops...
DeleteI like the word despair... SCA
The sun sat softly on the horizon.
ReplyDeleteThe snowflakes gently whispered to me.
Lovely - SCA
Deletethe harricane boxed the house down
ReplyDeleteTaine - before you post anything you need to check your punctuation and your spelling. SCA
DeleteThe sun shines with joy and laughter
ReplyDeleteThe rainbow glows, so full of happinnes
This is from bryanna,
The hail pummeled the city.
The thunder fought over the town.
Well done girls - SCA
Deletethe sunset slowley gose to sleep
ReplyDeletethw thunder growls
Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation before you post. SCA
DeleteThe sun sat softly on the horizon.
ReplyDeleteThe snowflakes gently whispered to me
Lovely - SCA
DeleteThey ready there selves for the bloodiest and most horrible ending
ReplyDeleteFear was the only thing on their face
The tummy grumbling sounding enemy plane inches closer by the second
FIRE!!
The End is near.
Death is near us.
ReplyDeleteWe ready ourselves for life or death
As I run out of the trench gritting my teeth
I can smell the gun powder running up my nose
As I run across the battle field ouch I stubbed my toe.
Skies weep bombs,
ReplyDeletePlanes howl,
Sirens screaming,
Innocence is strangeled
Life extinguished
Guns
ReplyDeleteBullet bolts out though the gun
Kills and injures a lot of people
Make people feel in shock and in pain
Observing the enemy then they pounce
The corpses of soldiers sleep forever on the battlefield
ReplyDeleteThey gaze at the battle unfolding before their eyes
The tanks roar past
Crunching and stomping on everything in their path
The bombs jump out of the planes overhead and kamikaze into the tanks
The bullets hurl themselves past
Then the battle is over.
The gun sharply cracked the whip.
ReplyDeleteIt then popped some popcorn ready to fire.
The enemy went down a steep hill
The enemy was nowhere to be seen.